http://written-whispers.com/blog/2010/01/05/plea-from-the-falling/ Spiritually Strange and Grammaticly Screwed Mon, 28 Nov 2011 13:25:36 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://written-whispers.com/blog/2010/01/05/plea-from-the-falling/comment-page-1/#comment-5439 Spirit Mon, 18 Jan 2010 09:16:36 +0000 http://written-whispers.com/blog/?p=1690#comment-5439 I've had several story ideas (packed tightly inside a special folder in my brain) where the main character is a writer- some of which the whole plot line revolves around story telling. You'll have to remind me to tell you about 'Other World' and 'Inkmortal' some time. ;) I agree, I think I know which lines need tightening up. I might bring a new rewrite over the whole thing and see what happens. I’ve had several story ideas (packed tightly inside a special folder in my brain) where the main character is a writer- some of which the whole plot line revolves around story telling. You’ll have to remind me to tell you about ‘Other World’ and ‘Inkmortal’ some time. ;)
I agree, I think I know which lines need tightening up. I might bring a new rewrite over the whole thing and see what happens.

]]> http://written-whispers.com/blog/2010/01/05/plea-from-the-falling/comment-page-1/#comment-5282 Jessie Carty Wed, 06 Jan 2010 13:10:04 +0000 http://written-whispers.com/blog/?p=1690#comment-5282 you could tighten up a few things but this is an example of how rhyme can actually do some good work in the poem. i could see this poem appearing in a fantasy type story. wonder if anyone has ever written a fantasy story where the main character was a writer? hmmm you could tighten up a few things but this is an example of how rhyme can actually do some good work in the poem. i could see this poem appearing in a fantasy type story. wonder if anyone has ever written a fantasy story where the main character was a writer? hmmm

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